Wednesday, 23 February 2011

This is not evidence

This is
This is not
This is not evidence
This is not evidence of being
This is not evidence of being happy
This is not evidence of being happy with you
This is not evidence of being happy with you here

This is not evidence
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4 comments:

  2. Thank you, glad you're enjoying it.

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  3. I enjoy this additive structure. I would have thought to see the ending be something like "THIS is." but I find your ending more suitable. Wonderful writings from what I've read thus far Baz.

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  4. Hi Defining Definitions, I don't think the last line is as effective as I originally thought. I do like your alternative idea. Thank you for the compliment :)

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