Pastel blue
fades to lemon yellow
Crossed by a faint white line
A honeymooners vapour trail
The lucky two
who planned their escape
to sunnier beaches
with cleaner hotel rooms
and more channels
to different bars
with similar cocktails
and a balcony view of
Pastel blue
fading into lemon yellow
crossed by a faint white line
the honeymooners vapour trail
fades to lemon yellow
Crossed by a faint white line
A honeymooners vapour trail
The lucky two
who planned their escape
to sunnier beaches
with cleaner hotel rooms
and more channels
to different bars
with similar cocktails
and a balcony view of
Pastel blue
fading into lemon yellow
crossed by a faint white line
the honeymooners vapour trail
I've to tell you, Baz, I got stuck here, in your blog. I've read your writings many times, I really like it. I might put a melody to them and then not show to anybody
ReplyDeleteHi Boxman, thanks for the compliment. As long as you credit me, I don't mind you adding music. I would be interested to hear what you come up with :)
ReplyDeleteI really like this Baz, it's simple whilst still being layered. Lovely, I love the pastel scenes which start and finish the piece.
ReplyDeleteNice going kidda
Bx
Thanks Bux :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with B-U-X and really like the layers and especially the colours. I can see this in my mind and imagination. Lovely.
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